I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Monday, March 22, 2021
Narrative Writing
I woke up from alarms screaming in my ears, sweat running down my spine, I was unsure what was going on. I started to panic, Many men dressed in yellow suits threw me onto there shoulder as they ran outside they threw me to the grown, as I looked up, smoke evaporated into the sky as my house turned into ashes.
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