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Monday, March 15, 2021

Creative writing (Show dont tell)

THUMP THUMP THUMP

My heart pounded through my chest,Fear as I strolled through the shops doors, Adrenaline as I Slipped the items into my bag, Embarrassment as customers watched me, Fear as I walked past employees.

Yelling, Beeping, sirens screamed as I ran away.





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  2. kia ora whanau another day in paradise chahoooooo

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    1. Stay ruthless and keep that vibes contagious!!!

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