They ended up playing a game of basketball of course my mate basketball shoes ended up winning. Finally they put the shoes back and we left the park and went home.


I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Hi Bryce!
ReplyDeleteI can tell you had fun with this piece of writing and writing about your "Nike Judes". I want you to be mindful of where your punctuation and full stops go, the beginning of your writing is a long run on sentence.
Do you enjoy our community time writing? What is your favourite topic to write about?
- Miss Birtch