My skin glowed as the sun Blazed down on my body. My ears hummed as the waves clashed into each other, My feet stumbled through the golden sand as I ran to the Sparkly water. My mouth watered as I Inhaled the smell of my lunch that I was about to consume, My skin roasted as I tanned in the Flaming hot sun.
I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, February 25, 2021
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Great work Bryce. You've done a superb job on all of your English tasks so far. I appreciate the consistent effort. Ka rawe :)
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