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Thursday, April 15, 2021

Writing Assesment

“Wow look at that” I turned around everybody had disappeared, and I had no idea where. I started to hear someone whispering, it started to echo. I hesitated to follow the echo but my body strolled towards the noise. It was getting darker and darker, it was too late to turn back. My body started to shiver as goosebumps appeared on my skin, My heart started to beat while I worried if I was going to make it out, I started to talk to myself as my brain wondered if anything bad was going to happen. I started to overthink everything I did, and everything that was going around me. 

As I continued to explore this strange place I noticed there was a door. I was curious about what was on the other side but had no courage to enter the door. Anything could be behind that door so I knew that it wasn't a smart idea to open it. I watched the door for some time and nothing had happened so I made a decision. I walked towards the door as quiet as an ant, I turned the handle as the door creaked very loudly. To my surprise there wasn't just one door on the other side there were so many doors, too many to even count. 

The first door that caught my eye was spooky. It had steam rising from the cracks of the door, liquids dripping down the door. A disgusting smell evaporated in the air, but the scariest thing was, there was no handle. I bent over to look through the hole and a dark red large pupil appeared, the door kicked open. I ran as fast as I could to one of the closest doors that looked the safest. When I entered this door I locked It and slowly turned around, there was everything a teenage boy could dream of. There were gaming consoles, Junk food, Arcade games, a full gym, this room had it all and it was the size of a house. I never wanted to leave this room, but I know that thing outside is waiting for me and a lock won't hold it off for too long. I wandered around, this room was full of fun and surprises. I sat down and played with the games and ate everything I could fit in my stomach. I started to hear yelling, I think it was time for me to go so I grabbed this ball and sneakily opened the door as quietly as I could and ran. As I was looking back I ran right into something3. I looked up and it was all my friends and family.


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